N. Yu.: an example of my corrections

We decided to choose the first discussion. Our point of view is that this man shouldn't be allowed to do (WW)  > commit a suicide because he (Gr) > it is a murder and he must suffer from punishment during whole this life (Exp) > during his whole life. 

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  1. Natalia EydelmanOctober 10, 2018 at 10:23 PM

    You shou;d habe published ir in the thread

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    1. Natalia EydelmanOctober 10, 2018 at 10:29 PM

      Can you share your impression about how this lesson was taught: did you like the form of it and the content? Would you like us to have a similar lesson format in the future?

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