A For and Against Essay. Arina Evstigneeva
Have Outer Beauty Is More Important In Contemporary Society
Nowadays the problem of beauty sacrifice is actually among people, especially youth. The main reason for this is a crucial shift in people’s mind towards the exaggerated importance of the appearance. Many people think that in the contemporary world, almost no one is interested in inner beauty as the outer but others do not agree. Let us speculate about it.
For the great majority of people, appearance does not play a great role in their lives. They think intellect is much more important because it provides a person with some inner beauty and it can let him be more attractive for others. For instance, a person who can support any topic during the conversation will always be a priority, unlike a person who looks well but cannot add anything from himself. It means that when people communicate with each other, they do it with the help of their knowledge, their thoughts, that is internal development, but not beautiful hair or outfit.
On the other hand, if a person does not care for himself in terms of appearance, then cause people any interest in himself will be extremely difficult. For instance, when a person makes a choice between what magazine he wants to read at the moment, he will choose the one whose cover is more interesting, colourful, and then will read the content. The same situation happens in real life. It is much more interesting for people to open a person like a book when it is pleasant to look at him.
From these facts, one may conclude that beauty is understood by everyone in different ways, for someone it plays a leading role, and for someone secondary. It is necessary to devote more time to the inner beauty it means to read, look, observe, learn, but should not forget also about the appearance. It is always pleasant to see the person, who looks after itself, but when you open its positive spiritual qualities — it is twice pleasant. After all, real beauty is the true harmony of body and soul. As the Russian proverb says, “Good clothes open all doors.”
The problem of beauty is **actually: WW +WF > urgent
ReplyDeletespiritual qualities — it is twice pleasant: struct. DASH here is not used in English
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ReplyDeleteStructure: well - developed
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Language: quite well-developed
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