Individual topic. Aleksandra Ushakova

"Money Matters a lot"


Nowadays it is fairly impossible to imagine our life without money. We have never seen the world without such a thing. However, the importance of money in people's lifes is a problem to discuss. The society is divided into people who find money the vital aspect of their life, people who believe money to be pure evil and people who just live their life without art strong emphasis on this aspect. The point of view of the last group of people is clear, and I find it the most adequate one. People who do everything in their life for money do not notice anything apart from that. Besides, people who does not think that money is an important part of their life at all are impractical. In my opinion, people should be down-to-earth. 
 

Sasha,

 it's not quite clear whether it is a summary of an article or your own thoughts on the topic. You should have made it clear. Also, if it is a summary you should have organised it better by using the expressions that show the logic of what you are reporting. Do you remember the summary template I have shared with your group?

 I'd advise you to revise this piece if you want to get a passing grade for it.

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  1. Natalia EydelmanMarch 31, 2019 at 5:07 PM

    Hello Sasha,

    As I can see, you haven't done any further work on on your draft. Do you have some problems with it? Do you need some help? Can you clarify the situation to me?

    ReplyDelete

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