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A for and against essay _Can robots replace people ?



   We live in the age of technology. Almost every day there are new wonders of engineering. One of the most amazing inventions of mankind is robots. Today there are many types of robots: androids, household robots, combat robots, etc. But scientists do not stop there. Ideally, robots will be just like humans in the near future. But some are against the rise of robots to people,fearing (P) that robots can completely displace people. Let's look at whether artificial intelligence really outshines its сreator.

   On the one hand, robots were created to make people’s life easily (WF).  This is their primary task-to help people, while not causing them any harm. In some areas, robots are necessary. For example, robots often help scientists explore areas that are dangerous to human life. Also robots are not useless in the industry where they do dangerous and difficult work for a human. It turns out that robots not only make our lives easier(,) but also to some extent save, help to avoid human casualties.

   On the other hand, many people are concerned that there will be robotization, i.e. the replacement of people with robots. No wonder this topic is devoted to so many films**.  Some companies are trying to automate production to the maximum(,) while reducing the number of live workers. They are pursuing their goal. Robots perform complex production operations 24 hours a day, the products manufactured by robots are of high quality, robots do not get sick, do not need a lunch break and rest, robots do not strike, do not require an increase in wages and pensions, etc. People lose their jobs, are left without money and have to look for another source of income, and this sometimes takes a long time. Therefore, it is likely that the general robotization of production will cause a revolt of the people.

   Considering the pros and cons of both approaches, I can make a conclusion that robots should remain man's helper (WNum), not his replacement. ART Robot must do work that for some reason a person can not (Sp) do a person(,) and help if it is necessary. Let’s believe that  robots will not be able to completely displace man. Machines can't think for themselves, they just follow a man-made program, unlike the man himself (Word Order).

Hello Katya,

the topic of your essay is really interesting and rich in content. However, I couldn't figure out what source or sources you have used to write it. It is obvious that you have. So, I am not sure whe the references are missing.

 **Gr: films are devoted to some topics, not topics 

 Content: 4: More points should have been considered
Organisation: 4 The thesis statement not specific enough; paragraph by paragraph organisation is more common when discussing the issues that are less sophisticated; to discuss those that are a point-by-point organisation is used.
Mechanics: 4
Language: 4.5 More sophisticated language could be used in the discussion

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