An opinion essay. Arina Evstigneeva



A Beautiful Time of Carelessness


                   Childhood is the beginning of a person’s life. Unfortunately, not for all people it was or is a wonderful time for various reasons, but for most, it is a collection of pleasant memories until the end of life. So what is childhood for a person? Let us speculate about it.
                   Firstly, this is a time of dreams and carelessness. Childhood, filled with games, magical fantasies and pranks, can be called happy. As a child, you rejoice in such simple things as the first snow or slightly frozen puddles on which you can jump. And how do children enjoy the New Year? It is always interesting to watch with what excitement they expect gifts that Santa Claus will bring at night through the window leaf and how they try to behave well to get the desired toys. Everyone has bright colourful moments that he or she keeps in his heart for many years.
                  Moreover, childhood is the first details of the puzzle, which is the world. Every child watches the adults and thinks who he would like to become in the future. Girls usually want to be the most beautiful and walk the catwalk; boys want to save everyone like brave superheroes. But despite this, they form ideas about different professions and what adults do that have an impact on their future choices in this case.
                 Overall, what is childhood? For each person, it is a special period of life. Someone has it full of happiness, love, care. And for somebody, is filled with cruelty, misunderstanding and rage. However, I think none of us will forget our childhood.



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  1. Natalia EydelmanMay 25, 2019 at 10:23 PM


    Arina,

    the topic you have chosen for discussion can be called eternal and you wrote about it in an appealing way, providing some examples and details that I am sure most of your readers can associate with.

    Content: 5
    Organisation: 4
    a) The thesis statement too general
    b) Conclusion: your essay would benefit from a more memorable conclusion, which you could create by using one of the techniques for conclusions. Here is a good resource that can help you do it: http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/conclude.html
    Mechanics:
    Childhood, filled with games, magical fantasies and pranks, can be called happy: punctuation
    Language: 5

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    1. Natalia EydelmanMay 25, 2019 at 10:25 PM

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    2. Natalia EydelmanMay 25, 2019 at 10:26 PM

      Mechanics: And for somebody, is filled with cruelty > IT is filled with cruelty

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    3. Natalia EydelmanMay 25, 2019 at 10:27 PM

      Mechanics: 4.5

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