Post 5. Inividual Topic. Koshechkina Valeria

Laughter is a great medicine. Do you agree?

      Well, this topic made me think. Until some time in the past I didn’t believe in any "medication", because if I am upset, nothing will help. I mean will not help unequivocally. Of course, it may muffle pain or disappointment for a while, but later I will still think about it. 
 
      However, I recently discovered this feature: laughter really makes me forget about problems. Or even (Sp) not exactly (Sp) laughter itself, but people who make me laugh. I feel complete peace and joy, which makes me happy, and after that it seems to me that there are no problems, and even if they are, they are insignificant. Laughter once again reminds me that I have people whom I love very much.

      All in all, laughter is the (Art) positive emotions. They always bring joy to a man, though not for long. That is why optimists live easier, they treat their problems from the positive side.

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 Lera,

 I am sorry I am not quite sure about what you have written I mean I could not figure out whether it is a note or what? If it an essay draft it is not fully developed and needs a lot of revision. More points should be added to the discussion as well as more supporting evidence. And if this is an essay, you should add a concluding paragraph.

 I'm sorry if my comment disappoints you and am ready to discuss how to improve what you have written. Let's discuss it in class today.  

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